For all the followers who are there, and who made the 100 possible, thank you.
Oh, by the way, I just wrote this. What do you think?
or no, it crumbles, like bricks.
Yet we live,
failing to end it all.
Ay, that brave, we're not.
So why not make the bricks,
a bit more colourful?
15 comments:
Congrats on 100 followers! :)
I love your poem.
I love all your poems.
Goodness you're amazing.
:)
Congo! :D
Congratulations Meher.
And we might not be strong enough to stop the bricks from falling, but as you said, we can be wise enough to color each one of them.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Congrats :)
Cute little poem. Loved it!
so why not make the bricks a bit more colorful?
you are so cute! lovely!♥
Congratulations!! :)
beautiful lines there!! :)
congrats :)
long live blogging!!
Hey, Hi
Hey, the BIG 100!! congrats gal...
The bricks crumble, but have we ever thought why?? colouring it is good, but why not make them stronger? and save it from falling??
Nice thought...nicely penned...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
Know how it feels. Relish! 100 is awesome! Waiting for my 200 like hell!
Poem...umm..got the point but still a lil hung up on the brick crumbling metaphor. Sorry, but doesn't really go well.
Congratulations on your 100 followers!!! I know you had been waiting very patiently for it to happen...you deserve it!! Love your poem as always..very cute..and I'm definitely with you in making the bricks more colorful! :D
Congrats! :)
Nice blog!
Congrats on your 100 :-)
Good stuff on your blog man,
cheers.
-Nil.
And now I see that it is 101 .......
The typical Indian figure "no no you must not give 100 Rs , always give 101 Rs"
@btd thank you so much. =)
@Drama Personified Thank you.
@B A =)
@Koo thanks much.
@Haze gee, thanks.
@Phoenix thank you.
@aakash yes, long live blogging.
@The Silhouette Everybody's life crumbles like bricks, some just have colourful ones.
@MangoMan hmm.
@Splurgerina Thank you so much. Love.
@The Blue Periwinkle thank you.
@nil thanks.
@Haddock which is a good omen. =)
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