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Sunday, February 27, 2011

55 Fiction #1

"She loves his lips, their outline, their feel. Perhaps, everything about them. She slowly touches them with her's, nibbling her way through them. She loves his eyes when she kisses him, they seem aroused, ready to be taken. Wholly.
She felt her hands outlining his lean yet taut frame, all the way down. His eyes were waiting, aroused to an indefinite extent. She was picked and taken, where she was felt, entirely. It was her turn, to be touched, all the way, his, to be taken ..."

She smiled, completely taken in by her thoughts. Waiting to feel, what she just felt, a bit more candidly.
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16 comments:

  1. ghghFebruary 27, 2011 at 6:00 PM

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  2. UnknownFebruary 27, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    wowness :D Drooling :)

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2011 at 6:54 PM

    Well penned dear!

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    Link= http://frekler.blogspot.com/

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  4. Sneha February 27, 2011 at 7:19 PM

    :) :)

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  5. Blasphemous AestheteFebruary 27, 2011 at 7:58 PM

    WOW, what did you just do? you gave no detail and yet said it all so beautifully, where is the rest I ask.

    Very nice piece of writing.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  6. FatimaFebruary 27, 2011 at 8:53 PM

    A very different piece of writing!
    Just started and ended but it didn't sound incomplete !!

    Good work.

    Take Care.

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  7. ererFebruary 27, 2011 at 10:54 PM

    wow.... hotness!!!

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2011 at 4:12 AM

    sweet and passionate... :)

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  9. The EnchantressFebruary 28, 2011 at 10:02 AM

    driving me crazzzzzzzzzzzy...

    lovelieee post meher...

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  10. KooFebruary 28, 2011 at 4:45 PM

    This post <3

    Btw, thanks, you made my day :')
    yayyy!

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  11. btd.March 1, 2011 at 4:16 AM

    Man, I read this a few times, and I'm still wrapped in it and smiling. Amazing as always. :)

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  12. Eon HeathMarch 1, 2011 at 9:40 AM

    Hey, Hi
    See, this is the very reason i said you deserved "The Versatile Blogger" award...
    the expressions were beautiful, i donno abt the guy, but the readers are sure to be left aroused... :P

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  13. ALMarch 1, 2011 at 11:36 AM

    Niceee readddddddddddd :)

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  14. MeherMarch 3, 2011 at 1:11 PM

    @Duchess thank you.

    @Schizophrenic =)

    @Blasphemous Aesthete thank you.

    @Fatima thank you.

    @Warm Sunshine =P

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  15. MeherMarch 3, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    @haze thank you.

    @Nikita thank you much.

    @Koo You're welcome.

    @btd thank you. =)

    @The Silhouette I'm glad. =)

    @Al Thanks.

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  16. D2March 6, 2011 at 9:08 PM

    Not graphic yet compels to imagine. Lovely piece of writing. :D
    Also, loved the show of her loneliness in the end. Had a very natural feel to it.

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