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Saturday, February 19, 2011

Make it worth it.

A path half trodden,
sitting in nowhere,
wondering...
was it worth it?
The risks she took,
the connections, that well, withered.
Was it worth it?
Maybe no.
Made her secluded,
seldom she spoke.
The friends?
Well, how much would they care?
Friendship is but, an over-rated emotion.
Hanging onto every word he spoke,
but well, his words
didn't reach her heart, not anymore.
They lay hanging in the air,
like the dull bulbs in the night,
which flicker for long, and then die.
Did she love him?
Oh, yes, she did.
Still?
Yes, very much.
Will she, forever?
Of course, without the slightest doubt.
But well, there were no words to say,
nothing sweet.
In loneliness, she hung on.
Was it worth it?
Maybe yes,
for the unspoken love that came her way.
She was naive, failed to read,
the silent promises of commitment he portrayed.
As i write this, i silently hope,
that the unspoken promises come sauntering by,
That she feels the love, again,
that was felt, from him alone.

10 comments:

  1. beautiful words...carved out of love..absolutely mesmerizing! :)

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  2. i love it. it's just what i needed to read.. keep writing.. :)

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  3. Love,
    Love is really nothing
    But a dream that keeps waking me
    For all of my trying, we still end up dying
    How can it be?

    ~John Mayer


    Just felt like singing it along as I read your post. :) Nice read.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  4. Hey, Hi
    just remembered these words,
    "I 'm all out of love, I'm so lost without you
    I know you were right, believing for so long
    I 'm all out of love, what am I without you
    I can't be too late, to say that I was so wrong"

    the write up was beautiful...simple, yet touching a chord deep down in the heart...light, yet forcing to feel...
    loved it gal... :)

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  5. Hey, Hi again...

    those words, they are form "All Out of Love - Air Supply"
    :)

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  6. nice one bt i love most the picture one...

    thanks

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  7. This was so beautiful and poetic. I made me sad though, love can be so painful.

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  8. Aww babe! This made my heart beat faster and feel sad... But it still is beautiful... You are amazing... ♥

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    Go collect at : stone-paper-scissor.blogspot.com
    (:

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  10. @phoenix thank you.

    @mehak thank you. =)

    @Blasphemous Aesthete Thanks much.

    @Eon thank you.

    @Kaylia it sure can. Thanks.

    @haze thank you. =)

    @Kanika yay! thanks.

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