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Wednesday, March 23, 2011

You can fall for pretty strangers, and the promises they hold.

Do you see? The silent smiles,
the barely there blushes,
the sneak peeks,
the whispering words of love, do you hear any?
When you strum your guitar, 
and sing her favourite song,
"Juliet, when we made love, you used to cry.
You said, "I love you like the stars above, I'll love you 'til I die"
The way she'd gush, as if it were for her.
The way she searches for your cues,
with her prying eyes, now on the loose.
Only for you,
her ears, for your music.
her hands for your touch.
Her soul, for yours.
Do you see?
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13 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 23, 2011 at 3:25 PM

    very nice post dear .....keep going!! the silent smiles...good yr!!

    Jai Ho Mangalmay Ho

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  2. Eon HeathMarch 23, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    Hey, Hi
    i donno why, but the song gives a hint of turbulence underneath the calm outlook...nice words...

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  3. Sam BMarch 23, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    I feel the love :) Loved it Meher!

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  4. AnonymousMarch 23, 2011 at 3:54 PM

    oh, this is lovely :)

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  5. The EnchantressMarch 23, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    loved it !!!!

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  6. AnonymousMarch 23, 2011 at 5:04 PM

    thats written very nicely

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  7. Blasphemous AestheteMarch 23, 2011 at 7:56 PM

    Only if we could read them right, they might be every where... and many of us would turn narcissists.
    But the problem is, how, how to do it right, and not overdo it, the reading thing.
    :P

    Nice one,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  8. aakashMarch 24, 2011 at 4:23 PM

    :)
    those few moments when it's just you and her in the crowd. The triumph of those first few realizations... This reminded me of some moments..
    Loved the read!

    aJ

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  9. PhilophobicMarch 24, 2011 at 4:51 PM

    Everybody falls in love with strangers, if only for half a second. The only reason it doesn't turn out well is because we don't know them.

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  10. Pesto SauceMarch 24, 2011 at 5:51 PM

    We all look for love, don't we?

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  11. Kaylia PayneMarch 25, 2011 at 3:59 AM

    Oh, beautiful!! This is my favourite post of yours yet!
    I love the description, the barely there blushes and silent smiles.

    Lovely!

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  12. Aayushi MehtaMarch 30, 2011 at 4:48 PM

    Wow. Am I glad I found your blog, or what.

    This poem of yours just left me dumbfounded! :)

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  13. keishuaApril 1, 2011 at 8:30 PM

    lovely and true.

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