Thursday, February 3, 2011

The Ride

Eyes, that see nothing, but the absolute,
we rise, slowly first,
a little faster later,
An old man, and a tiny girl, hands held tight.
Rise in anticipation,
and fall from madness.

8 comments:

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Life's a roller coaster indeed.
Nice one, apprehension and uncertainty before the joyride takes the most joyous dip.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

The Silhouette said...

Hey, Hi
quite something in words so less. nicely put, a thought well said...

Regards,
The Silhouette...

divsi said...

too good:)very vivid..

The Many Colours of Happiness said...

Love this! The last line is my favourite :)

aakash said...

So true.
And the ride never ends, till the end. Circles of vacuum.

Phoenix said...

beautiful imagery!! i so loved it! back after ages but with a pledge to keep visiting.... :)

Meher S B said...

@blasphemous Aesthete well said, thanks.

@Eon thanks.

@Divsi thank you.

@The Many Colours of Happiness mine too. =)

@Aakash thanks for dropping by.

@Pheonix Please do. =)

♥ Duchess ♥ said...

Beautiful..

U are a Unique writer..