Sunday, February 27, 2011

55 Fiction #1

"She loves his lips, their outline, their feel. Perhaps, everything about them. She slowly touches them with her's, nibbling her way through them. She loves his eyes when she kisses him, they seem aroused, ready to be taken. Wholly.
She felt her hands outlining his lean yet taut frame, all the way down. His eyes were waiting, aroused to an indefinite extent. She was picked and taken, where she was felt, entirely. It was her turn, to be touched, all the way, his, to be taken ..."

She smiled, completely taken in by her thoughts. Waiting to feel, what she just felt, a bit more candidly.

16 comments:

RAKESH said...
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♥ Duchess ♥ said...

wowness :D Drooling :)

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Schizophrenic said...

:) :)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

WOW, what did you just do? you gave no detail and yet said it all so beautifully, where is the rest I ask.

Very nice piece of writing.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Fatima said...

A very different piece of writing!
Just started and ended but it didn't sound incomplete !!

Good work.

Take Care.

WarmSunshine said...

wow.... hotness!!!

haze said...

sweet and passionate... :)

Nikita said...

driving me crazzzzzzzzzzzy...

lovelieee post meher...

Koo said...

This post <3

Btw, thanks, you made my day :')
yayyy!

btd. said...

Man, I read this a few times, and I'm still wrapped in it and smiling. Amazing as always. :)

The Silhouette said...

Hey, Hi
See, this is the very reason i said you deserved "The Versatile Blogger" award...
the expressions were beautiful, i donno abt the guy, but the readers are sure to be left aroused... :P

Regards,
The Silhouette...

AL said...

Niceee readddddddddddd :)

Meher S B said...

@Duchess thank you.

@Schizophrenic =)

@Blasphemous Aesthete thank you.

@Fatima thank you.

@Warm Sunshine =P

Meher S B said...

@haze thank you.

@Nikita thank you much.

@Koo You're welcome.

@btd thank you. =)

@The Silhouette I'm glad. =)

@Al Thanks.

D2 said...

Not graphic yet compels to imagine. Lovely piece of writing. :D
Also, loved the show of her loneliness in the end. Had a very natural feel to it.