Thursday, January 20, 2011

For life.

"She said, "I want you,
as much as I need you""
Kneeling down,
beckoning him close..
close to her heart.
The determined wall created,
had finally been broken down.
Alluring him with her love,
her undying loyalty,
her unspoken commitment.
"Forever", she seldom said.
But "for life" is how she felt.
Humbled in his love,
the vulnerable her,
that had been hidden from everyone,
but him,
often won him over.
She was a baby,
mistakes she had made, many.
Every time, his eyes flared,
she'd kneel down again,
tears welling up,
craving for the love,
which returned soon after.
Funny, they were,
always together, in amour and tears.
Sometimes severe,
but often effusive.
Together they'd be,
in love and pain,
"for life" is how, she'd let it remain.


P.S. The first two lines have been credited to the song- I want you by Kings of Leon.

10 comments:

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

'For life' is much better, forever has to have constraints.
Nice poem, beautiful feelings.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

The Silhouette said...

Hey, Hi...

u donno why, but i loved this one...simply luvd it...its penned amazingly well...just brilliant...

Regards,
The Silhouette...

The Silhouette said...

Hey, Hi...

u donno why, but i loved this one...simply luvd it...its penned amazingly well...just brilliant...

Regards,
The Silhouette...

Fatima said...

It's an brilliant poem and the flow is unrestrained !

Nice one..loved it.

Take Care,
Fatima

WarmSunshine said...

the flow was superb!!! heart felt indeed :)

prakhar rastogi said...

ya i agreee wid oll of d above comments.....
u have a urge in words to attract me as well as person out der....

nd ya flow, poetic....wow!!!!

Sayak said...

Through love and pain,
he test of the mundane,
through sunshine and rain,
they will remain,
maintain,
reign.

Meher S B said...

@blasphemous Aesthete thanks much =)

@The Silhouette thanks so much Eon.

@Fatima thankyou for dropping by.

@Warm sunshine thanks.

@prakhar you share your name with my bestie =P .Thanks for dropping by.

@Sayak how wonderfully written!

Schizophrenic said...

:) :)

Mehak said...

absolutely magical!