Saturday, November 13, 2010

Bliss...

Perhaps,with not much to say,she lay frozen amidst the photographs.Taking one in her hand,she lay reminiscing about the old times.When everything seemed perfect.Too perfect to be true.
How his warmth,his touch,his embrace,his whispers filled her day with bliss.Bliss is short-lived,she thought.Permanent is how she wanted things to say.She can't recall,it must have been an entire night,that she had been sitting like this,or maybe more..
The tears had dried,she felt void,emotionless.She saw the shiny thing that was covered by a photograph.Of her and Stan,smiling,hugging.She took it,not the photograph,but the shiny metal.Thought about it,the life,without him,without his touch.A smile touched her lips,as she felt a sharp pang of pain....Bliss after-all.

Stan was getting late.He knew he couldn't let go of the one girl he loved the most.So many misunderstandings,so many fights.He had been egoistic,allright.But this was his chance,to make up to her.To win her back.He ran up the staircase.As soon as he reached the door,he fumbled with the keys,and pushed the door ajar.There she lay,in all her senile beauty,with the same smile on her flawless face.He could have gone and hugged her when he noticed the red colouration on the floor.He screamed,the loudest he ever had.....

7 comments:

Arjit Srivastava said...

Superbly written, Meher. Minus the spacing and the color, the post was a complete turn on for me. Though, somehow I had predicted the end- but, still it was presented in such a way that it held my attention.

Keep writing. :)

David Tac said...

Very well written! Loved the photograph, and pay more attention to fonts and colors. If you do, you're in the hot spot right away! :)

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Md. Muddassir Shah said...

This made for a nice read.
Very well written Meher.

Cheers!!

Splurgerina said...

Nice work...I could picture everything you had written!!

Sourav C Pandey said...

Too realistic to be a fiction!